On a cold Monday the Crusders came to school and they were teaching us rugby skills . We were playing games too.
We played Unders and Overs too. We had fun and they signed our tee shirts and our flags too. I felt excited when we were playing the games because the Crusders came along to teach us rugby skills.
Hi Ashton,
ReplyDeleteThe introduction is fantastic as it tell what time and why the Crusders came to Burnham school.
Next Step is to add more detail in the content of the recount. Also remember that all recounts finish with a feeling. I would like to see you write a feeling independently in your next recounts next time.
Mr Thurlow